Bitch. Moan. Write. Bitch. Moan. Write.

[avocado_love]

This next chapter of Another Brother is making all of my characters go insane. I have these ideas I think are great in my head, and then... then they get typed out they turn into something else completely.

Example: Zuko and Sokka have gone from being the ultimate tag team of awesomeness to turning on each other in their stress and having about three snippy bitch-fights (one of which almost got physical). The pirate captain is making uber creepy overtures to Katara, and keeps assuming Iroh wants to do the same. (This is a kid's show, people! KID'S SHOW.)

Aang is... drunk? Wha...?

I'm working on something else for a bit.

Comments

[dungeonwriter.livejournal.com]

Hey, it sounds good to me! I think a bitch fight (and some Katara/Iroh) would be incredible.

But then again, I'm praying for Iroh to capture ZUko for a bit to talk to him.

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

Your wish will totally be granted! But not in this chapter. Besides, even if Iroh talks, Zuko's gotta listen. He's good at not doing that. :)

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

The pirate captain is making uber creepy overtures to Katara, and keeps assuming Iroh wants to do the same.

*laughs* I so want to see that. :D

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

That's one part I think I have to keep in. So you will! :D

[thistle-chaser.livejournal.com]

Heehee yay!

[dark-puck.livejournal.com]

Aang is... drunk?

Well, they did get him 'high' in the Avatar State... :D

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

... you know, that's a good point. I was like, well what would keep him out of the Avatar State? Knocking him out, drugging him, getting him drunk... but I thought it was stupid, so... maybe? We'll see.

BTW: Poor Aang has no alcohol tolerance.

[dustyjack.livejournal.com]

...I see nothing wrong with anything above. XD Is that just me? I was so horrified/delighted at the pirate innuendo directed at Katara in the last chapter.

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

Really?

I think I have my writing = no self confidence glasses on, because I was like. "Ahhh! It's crap. It's all crap. I suck...ect." I'm getting over it. These things always happen on my weekends. :)

And yeah, I figured these pirates are out to sea a lot, and Katara's a lovly young lady and... well, that's why Iroh had to be introduced, quickly. The pirate barker totally has a crush on Sokka, though. XD

[dustyjack.livejournal.com]

LOL I understand. I'm in a similar thing. I sort of hte weekend because they let me, you know, like... THINK.

Anyhow, I don't see any problems with any of the turns of events that you're describing. Seems to me like the story is just trying to direct itself! XD

Also: OMFG I THOUGHT THAT WAS THE CASE WITH THE BARKER. I didn't want to SAY anything because I try not to see the gay in EVERYTHING and lord knows I'd already left enough retarded footnotes on that chapter.

[ashacrone.livejournal.com]

Well, um, Sokka and Zuko actually have a lot of chemistry in this story..? If you didn't intend Zuko/Katara I'd have thought you wanted Sokka/Zuko. So I can see them getting into a bitchfight. So I don't see anything wrong with the above anyways.
And someone has to drink the cactus juice, right?

[dungeonwriter.livejournal.com]

Wait, Another Brother is Zuko/Katara?

[ashacrone.livejournal.com]

... maybe I misread something somewhere... very likely...

[dungeonwriter.livejournal.com]

I could be wrong, but I thought Avacado wasn't sure yet. She's a genius, she does leave us guessing.

[ashacrone.livejournal.com]

At FF.N, off the top of my head, it is listed under Katara/Zuko (without romance being listed as a genre.) I could have sworn I saw it earlier and I am way too tired right now to go looking further. *bows* Well, in any case, oh well. I'll just read along and keep having fun and wish Avocado luck.

[dungeonwriter.livejournal.com]

Yes, it's under Zuko/Katara.


And same here.

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

Hai there! Look what I miss when I fall asleep at ungodly early hours! :D

Yep, you're both right. I haven't decided on a ship yet (Zuko/Meng FTW!... No, not really.) It is listed as Katara/Zuko, with no romance listed because those two are the main characters in the story. Or at least, they were supposed to be. Sokka's been butting in a whole lot recently... I'm trying to fix that. So there ya go!

[avocado-love.livejournal.com]

Why yes they do have an over abundance of chemistry in this story. Unfortunately, there isn't any Sokka/Zuko in this one. But I am totally planning on them drinking cactus juice one of these days, and fun times will be had.

[ashacrone.livejournal.com]

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet. I am waiting with bated breath.

[ruebroadway.livejournal.com]

Drunk Aang FTW...