I'm very intrigued by what you have so far! Also, to find out what's going on... I'm inordinately fond of young Kakashi: his competance, his angstiness, his arrogance... I like his guesses as to what happened to the two of them and his pragmatic answers to what their course of action should be. :) I like that Kakashi's assessment of Iruka as someone useless isn't exactly true, what with his experience with setting traps. ;)

I have to wonder what the "sensei" comment meant, and the bit with Kakashi's eyes... is this a timetravel fic as well? I'm very intrigued! :D