Nice story!

And shortsighted Kakashi is shortsighted, sigh. Cute scene in Naruto's house too... just.. why does he always always have to live in the bad area?

He's never shown to lack money or decent weapons either.

Sorry, just beaten and cheated Naruto is kinda a pet peeve of mine. And while this doesn't even come close to the worst offenders... it kinda comes close.

Beside that though very very interesting^^