Haha...nice! Parts of this chapter had me laughing out loud (particularly Iruka's scenes. I like how you wrote his character).
I always like to give time travel fics a try...I hope this stays as interesting as it promises so far. You've left some things the same, but you didn't write them out word for word or scene by scene, which is a big plus.
Ah, just one thing...in the beginning when you were talking about Naruto surpassing the previous Hokage, it should be spelled "Fourth", not "Forth". "Fourth" has to do with the number, and "forth" means to go forward. Homonyms. Everybody hates 'em. ;p
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I always like to give time travel fics a try...I hope this stays as interesting as it promises so far. You've left some things the same, but you didn't write them out word for word or scene by scene, which is a big plus.
Ah, just one thing...in the beginning when you were talking about Naruto surpassing the previous Hokage, it should be spelled "Fourth", not "Forth".
"Fourth" has to do with the number, and "forth" means to go forward.
Homonyms. Everybody hates 'em. ;p